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I ask that you all give me as much feedback as you possibly can on this one. I am considering using it as my opening piece for a online community I have joined recently, and I want to make sure it is the best that I can do. Even an "I like it", or an [...]

I want to wash myself in a cold hard rain,
clothe myself in clean blades of green grass,
and pull the dark grey clouds up under my chin.
I want the wind to whisper me lullabys,
and the birds to sing me to sleep.
And just as I am about to doze off,
I want the moon to switch off the [...]