[understand]
I ask that you all give me as much feedback as you possibly can on this one. I am considering using it as my opening piece for a online community I have joined recently, and I want to make sure it is the best that I can do. Even an "I like it", or an "I don't like it" is better than nothing at all.
In shadows
Hidden
Waiting
And everything seems okay
And it is
Until Someday
Someday I'll POUNCE
And you'll wonder what happened
Pounce
