Comments on: unnoticed http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/ because a Reverend can't be wrong. Wed, 09 May 2012 16:43:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Wendy http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/comment-page-1/#comment-46239 Wendy Thu, 23 Nov 2006 21:25:23 +0000 http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/#comment-46239 Fantastic poem. I really like when you say: the pipes are mended and the skin is restored leaving only a small scar that will fade in time. Fantastic poem. I really like when you say:

the pipes are mended
and the skin is restored
leaving only a small scar
that will fade in time.

]]> By: gloria http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/comment-page-1/#comment-45148 gloria Mon, 20 Nov 2006 21:23:06 +0000 http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/#comment-45148 awesome metaphor, daniel. i like it a whole lot. awesome metaphor, daniel. i like it a whole lot.

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